when ordinary people aren't fortunate enough to look like what they see people in magazine it drives them to make themselves sick because they think oh thats what im suppose to look like. from that people start trying to lose weight by not eating or eating less causing them to get eating disorders.
modifying pictures in a big way is wrong to me. and effect to it causes people to have low self esteem and purposely and accidently hurt themselves because they want to look like what they see in magazines. making big changes of your look through technology doesnt really show the real you. its like having a fake identity because it not really the real you.
even though i think it's doesn't mean you should to. we all have different views of the situation. maybe by you reading my statement have made you turn to my beliefs or maybe it didnt. either ways its your choice.
Need to work on concluding paragraph. "We all have different opinions" is not a strong enough finish. Defend your position.
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